Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Let me know what you think

I open my eyes and I feel
Always there an infinite dark reminder
Fall again and all will be well
It lies I know, honeyed words hard not to believe

Once more rake the flesh
Come back to reality
A promise of normalcy
This addiction of blood and pain

Razor sharp slides
Opening a channel of sanity
Permanent consequences
For a temporary solution

Truly the great battle
Fought alone and at home
The only true way to sanity
Lies in never letting go



I like the first two stanzas. Not so much on the second two.

1 comment:

Joshua Geddert said...

I thought it was very good, and i am in the same boat as you... great first two...? stanzas... haha
but not settled on the last two, sure I will like them once i have read it a few times...